Tuesday, November 13, 2007

Blowin' in the wind....

MISSIONARY RIDGE

We climb.
We climb higher and higher
and steeper and steeper.
There are ten of us, all seniors
meaning aging adults.
But I climbed alone.
I recall stopping to point out
a purple daisy...
"Aster?" I asked but
no-one was there to hear me.

We climb
and they climbed faster than me.
I recall approaching them all,
gathered at a natural ledge.
Looking out to the long valley
far below, I comment,
"That rapid looks so small
from here."
But they had all climbed on.

In time, as we ascended,
they were distant white ghosts
in a sea of oranges and reds
while I listened first
to my breath somewhat labored.
Then I heard my walk and now
I heard dried leaves crackle underfoot,
which brought forth the pleasant
dusty-musty scent of dried leaves.

I stopped.
High enough now, I could gaze
on entire hillsides.
Oranges, yellows, reds -- all oakbrush
after the fire --
and that view was highlighted
by stark white dead trees,
their bark long fallen off.

I wanted to string tuned wires
between the lyre forms
now revealed in the tree-trunks.
What sound would I hear then,
played by the wind?

I used to stand on another ridge,
guitar in hand
fingers in shifting chord formation
and single fingerings.

And with that strong seasonal wind
blowing
I held the guitar out there
And I let the wind
blow me the answer.
10-11-07

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3 comments:

Ramón Sender Barayón said...

Hi Sara!
Congrats for yet another connective pasttime (I should talk!). Great poem, and I think of that tree next to OB's tree that had a lyre-shated double truck. I always wanted to 'Aeolian-harp' it!
Ah well, things to so-called 'do' are endless, when actually the end factor is 'do-do.' You have to multiply the word by itself.
Wot am I saying? Just finished my short piece collectioned titled 'Planetary Sojourn." Like the title?
Love -- and post MORE MORE MORE!
R

Steven Meglitsch said...

Blowing in the wind ...
or winding in the blow

I think you should publish more of your stuff here.

Sara Ransom said...

From a friend, by email, about this entry:
It's good to hear from you. Thanks for the poem, a bittersweet song of growing older -- the "air" up on that mountain is time itself.
--A.N.